The Day the Earth Stood Still
Finally there is something scary
After all this love
My hands are shaking very wearily
This surely isn't fun
This surely isn't fun
The world is not ending
But life is very short
I feel as if the world's not turning
My mind is going bizerk
I feel the human race is little
So is the water and food
We are acting so pitiful
There is no good mood
Keanu Reeves is the best actor
For this movie coming soon
The Day the Earth Stood Still
It's really such a thrill
I recommend you see it
I really think you should
It may be very scary
So hold on to your hood
I saw this movie that she was talking about it was really good.
ReplyDeleteSean 5th
Nice poem!! But who is Keanu Reeves... I really want to see The Day the Earth Stood Still. Hope you could make some more!
ReplyDelete~~~Andrew 5th grade
Good poem. It was catchy and good ryhmes!
ReplyDeleteThat was a really awesome poem
ReplyDeleteI really liked it, too
I liked how some of it rymed
and some was so in to the time
Now i want to see that movie
all because of that
And if you want to
only if you want
you can write moreon here
and i would enjoy that!
~Amanda
I love how descriptive this poem is , it makes me wanna see the movie now.
ReplyDeleteWOW boy do i want to see that movie
ReplyDeleteit sounds very scary
it might get hairy
i hope i don't get scared
if i see it?!?!
Danielle
I love your poem! Your poem made me want to see "The day the Earth stood still".
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